AUSTRALIAN NATIONAL ANTHEM: my attempt with minor changes. Adding 'dream time' might it may help us recognise the original peoples of our land.

My version:- AUSTRALIAN NATIONAL ANTHEM

Australians all let us rejoice, this ancient land that sets us free

The dream time is our heritage, it’s what makes us young and free;

 We’ve golden soil and wealth to share, our home is girt by sea;

Our land abounds in nature’s gifts, beauty rich and rare;

In history’s page, let us strive to Advance Australia Fair.

 In joyful strains then let us sing, Advance Australia Fair.

Beneath our radiant Southern Cross We’ll toil with hearts and hands;

 To make this Commonwealth of ours Renowned of all the lands;

 For those who’ve come across the seas We’ve boundless plains to share;

 With courage let us all combine To Advance Australia Fair.

In joyful strains then let us sing, Advance Australia Fair